Tuesday, 19 March 2013

My Candidate Page

1. An Article exaplaining and intorducing what i think are 'the effects WW1 had on social mobility In Britain.

2.In  table on page 



3a) 

his Essay is similar to that which i am going to write my article on and this gives me some good facts that i can include. It is also based on a study website which shows that it is based as a younger audience which gives me an idea of that sort of writing style. The figures that are in the essay are very helpful to back up the points that i willl need.

This is a graph of two triangles showing the class division before and then after the war. The picture source that i used was to give my essay a kind of sum up. It can be all explained in one just picture that will help me structure my essay and make sure I know i continue to keep going in one direction. This picture shows that they may not be more merged there have become more categories that the people can fit into. it shows that although there are many differences between both times the working class always has the most people in it and dominants the different social classes.These show the basic facts and help me give a structure the the essay so i know what basis to stick to.

The Downton abbey artilce is opinion piece that is not biast so it shows be how I can include my own opinion. It also links my other source on downton abbey but it shows how it can be put into writing. This article links in well what happened into the past and how it still could be going on today and how much of what went on there was true at the time when it was set.

The presentation lays out the reasons why it happened in simple terms and gives a good outline of what my catorgories could be for why this change occurred in the way that it did the end. This gives us some useful facts in the slides but gives you plenty of room to develop on a further point.

Finally, The Interview gives us some knowledge and looking at the tv series as a sorce put these ideas into context and it shows us how they would have actually effected the average family and their workers. It shows us from an expert in this area what they thought were the main sources. It gives me an actual example of each person and how and then the other sources back up why this was like it was and with fatcs.

In summary, I was able to use five different types of sources inclusind a tv series, a presentation, an interview and a couple of other essays/articles which is more similar to the style in which i will be writing. The presentation and the picture are very good in giving me a basis to my writing and they give me somewhere to work to. The artivle and the essay then add to this with facts and figures and the tv series and the interview allow me to give examples that people would know of today and how how it is still a very relevant topic tosay based on how succesful Downton Abbey is today.



 3b)
 For The article and the essay i printed them off and then highlighted the key points and put and annotated the key figures and points. The picture I just looked at and annotated on a sheet after printing it off. For the presentation I re-typed so that I could then pic out and underline the key facts and reasons. For the Tv series I watched the series and then took down notes on all the characters and how they changed before,during and after. I also asked Julian his thoughts which I could emphasise the ideas in downton abbey.  

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